The Test


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Spring, 1964: South London

At the end of the school day, they emerge like cannon fire: exploding through the school’s double doors with a running, tumbling, scuffling roar.

Teasing, laughing, pinching, shoving – eleven years old and set free – they burst chaotically across the wide tarmac of the sun-filled playground and out through the gates before the bell has stopped sounding and while the laggards are still clearing their desks.

On they run. Clattering their wooden rulers along the chain-link fence, they race ricocheting down School Lane: Tim Harden, Henry Phippard, Chris Bonfield, George Riggs, Tom Pushman, Lucy Kennison, Charlie Clark.

At the end of the lane, they are brought to an unwelcome and sudden halt by the forbidding hand of Mr Smead, the pinch-faced lollipop man; they fall quiet, stand obediently at the kerbside and wait.

An impatient minute passes: it feels like an hour.

But then the traffic clears and they are waved across and soon they are hopping zigzags through Ruskin Park; they are chasing, skipping, windmilling across the grass.

An hour passes: it feels like a minute.

They drop their satchels and wrestle; climb the steep shining slope of the playground slide; push the swings, higher, higher; turn cartwheels, scrape their bare knees, scuff their shoes. They link arms and sing: Top of the Pops, tunelessly, at the tops of their voices.

‘There she was just a-walkin’ down the street,

singin’ “Do wah diddy diddy dum diddy do’

And they play the game they always play.

‘What’s the capital of Venezuela, Tom?’

‘Caracas,’ Tom says.

Tom Pushman knows everything. He comes top in every class, first in every test: he’s always reading – and what he reads, he remembers. They try to beat him every day.

‘What’s the name of the Prime Minister, Tom?’

‘Alec Douglas-Home,’ he says.

Usually, he’s to be found at the noisy thick of things – but today he’s fallen a little behind the rest. He’s dragging his feet unhappily; his head is bowed.

‘What’s the tallest mountain in the world, Tom?’

‘Everest,’ he mumbles.

‘How tall is it, Tom?’ Lucy says, skipping around him.

‘Twenty nine thousand feet,’ he says. Not looking at her.

‘What’s twelve times fourteen, Tom?’

‘One hundred and sixty eight,’ he says, without a pause. Not looking up.

‘Is it?’ Lucy says.

They all shrug; Charlie Clarke straightens her ponytail and glares. If Tom Pushman says it’s one hundred and sixty eight, it must be right.

When it’s time to leave, they make their chattering way slowly beyond the park to the tall detached houses and gravel drives of the Grove. One by one they peel away to their front doors, shouting their goodbyes.

‘See ya, Charlie. See ya, Professor.’

That’s what they call him.

‘See ya, Charlie. See ya, Brainbox.’

They call him that too.

Finally, it’s just the two of them left and they turn to walk through the last of the leafy avenues of the Grove, towards Skinners, the shabby, grey-slabbed council estate beyond.

And as soon as they are alone, Charlie does what she has always done. She slips her hand into Tom’s and waits for him to squeeze and hold it tight.


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There’s something wrong, she knows it. He hasn’t given her hand a squeeze, like he’s meant to. He isn’t swinging along, smiling, talking like he usually does.

‘Is everything all right, Tom?’ she says.

He doesn’t answer.

‘We are still friends?’ she says, suddenly anxious.

He looks at her, manages a smile.

‘Of course,’ he says.

Best friends, he thinks. Best friends ever. Always.

‘What is it then?’ she says.

He stops. Let’s go of her hand. Looks down. Kicks at the pavement.

‘Did you hear it?’ he says. ‘The shouting … last night?’

She shakes her head. They live next door to one another, always have; his bedroom looks across to hers. But she hadn’t heard anything. Not this time.

‘It was the worst. The worst ever,’ he says.

It had been bad for months. His mother had been getting increasingly erratic, dangerously dark, combustible. She’d been like this before – but his father’s answer this time had been to spend even more time propping up the bar in the Skinners Arms. And that had made her worse. Last night, the wild damaging storm that had been threatening all the while had broken.

Charlie takes his hand again. Squeezes.

‘It’ll be all right, Tom,’ she says.

It’s his turn to shake his head.

‘Not this time, Charlie,’ he says. ‘My mum says she’s had enough. She says we’re going away – just her and me.’

Charlie drops his hand, panicked, outraged.

Going?’ she says. ‘Where?’

He shrugs. He doesn’t know.

‘Forever?’ she says, her world collapsing.

He nods.

‘When?’ she says, her eyes wide.

He shrugs again. But he thinks it’s soon. He thinks it’s now.


‘But you can’t go!’ Charlie says with a sudden triumphant grin. ‘You’ve got to tell her!’

They are outside Tom’s gate now.

She looks so pleased with herself, he can’t help smiling too.

‘Why not?’ he says.

‘Because of the test, stupid!’ she says, straightening her ponytail again, flicking her fringe from her eyes. ‘You can’t leave now. Miss Hodgkin says it’s the most important thing … like ever.’

He’d forgotten about the test: the Eleven Plus. But he knows it won’t make any difference to his mother. She won’t listen: when she’s like this, it’s as if she can’t hear anything, only what’s inside her head. If she’s decided they’re leaving, that’s it.

‘I’d better go in,’ he says, frowning, glancing towards his front door.

She picks up her satchel.

‘Wait,’ she says. ‘I’ve got you something.’

From inside the satchel, she takes a sheet of paper, folded into a square. She hands it to Tom.

‘What’s this?’ he says.

‘Open it,’ she says.

Tom carefully unfolds the paper. Inside are two small loops of golden thread.

He doesn’t understand.

‘It was left over from cross-stitch,’ she says, suddenly self-conscious, foolish. ‘There’s one for you and one for me.’

She hadn’t meant to give it to him now; she wasn’t sure she was ever going to give it to him. She’d thought he might laugh at her; she was going to wait and see. But now?

She takes one of the threads from the paper.

‘Hold out your hand,’ she says.

He obeys her, wondering. And then watches as she ties the thread around the finger where his father wears his wedding ring.

‘Now you,’ she says, holding out her hand.

He threads the loop around her finger, manages to tie a bow.

‘There,’ she says, her eyes filling.

Tom doesn’t know why but he can feels tears pricking too.

‘It’s for luck,’ she says. ‘As long as we both wear them, nothing bad will ever happen.’

But in her heart she feels a cold stab of truth: she knows she doesn’t believe it.

And neither does he.



Two years later: June, 1966

There’s a distant shout from across the High Street.


Charlotte doesn’t hear it: she’s busy with her friends. And anyway, no one calls her Charlie any more.

It’s the time of the day she loves most: all the girls together, the usual going-home crowd in their royal blue Grammar School blazers and summer dresses, walking arm in arm, laughing, all talking at once.

Today the talk is all about what happened in double Chemistry; about bossy Mrs Wright, threatening to measure their skirts next term; what Tim Harden said to Lucy Kennison at lunchtime; Chris Bonfield being caught smoking behind the tennis court – again ; about George Harrison on Top of the Pops last night; Diana Rigg’s groovy new boots on the Avengers; about Susie’s birthday party at the weekend – were they all going? what were they wearing? shall they get ready together?

They’re the Grammar School smart set. None of them ever says so aloud – but they all think it. Thirteen going on sixteen, they hold their heads high, wear their hair long and straight and their school summer dresses as short as they can get away with.

Charlotte loves to be part of it – even though she always feels she has to be on her guard, trying hard to fit in. She knows she isn’t truly one of them, doesn’t really belong.

And because of this, she’s learned that there are times when the best thing, the only thing, she can do is keep quiet, nod, smile.

It’s been like that today: when they were discussing where they’re going on holiday in the summer with their parents or talking about their new dresses for the party.

There are no holidays, no new dresses for her: Mum and Dad simply can’t afford them.

And although she’s been to all of their houses – gone up to their bedrooms, sat on cushions on their floors, listening to the latest singles on their Dansette record players – she’s never invited any of the girls home with her. She couldn’t! She wouldn’t want any of them know that she lives in a squeezed council house on Skinners.

Everyone knows how rough Skinners is: no one wants to go there.

And she wouldn’t want them to see her tiny box-like bedroom where there’s no space to put a cushion on the floor. Or a Dansette either. Even if she had one.

It’s not that she’s ashamed, she tries to tell herself. Not exactly.

It’s just that if they knew she lived on Skinners and that her mum and dad were just ordinary – that they didn’t know the right words for things, the right things to talk about, that Dad didn’t work in an office, he was only was a decorator – they might turn their backs on her. She’d seen them do it to other girls who had said something they didn’t like or who they thought were common.


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The shout from across the street comes again.

‘Charlie Clarke!’

They all stop this time, fall silent, stare.

He’s two years taller, of course: his hair is longer. But Charlotte recognises him at once. She blushes crimson.

‘Who is that?’ Susie says, appalled.

He’s wearing the black school blazer of the local Secondary Modern school. They are Grammar School girls: they don’t talk to the Eleven Plus failures at the Secondary Modern.

Especially boys.

Wouldn’t be seen dead.

Charlotte doesn’t understand: Tom Pushman, who always knew everything, who could answer every question. At the Secondary Modern? It makes no sense.

‘Charlie, it’s me!’ Tom yells. ‘I’m back!’

Susie laughs.

‘Do you know that thing?’ she says, as if he has slithered from the gutter, from some dark, repellent place beneath a stone.

Charlotte recovers herself, thinks quickly. Laughs too.

‘He was at my primary school,’ she says, dismissively. ‘I think he fancies me!’

‘Yuk!’ Susie says, grabbing Charlotte’s arm sympathetically, rescuing her, steering her away.

Charlotte breathes more easily. The crisis has passed and they are off again; laughing, talking.

But as they go, she glances back and across the road.

When he left, she’d missed him so much she thought her heart would break. She’d kept the golden thread on her finger every day and had cried when it had finally worn away, when it was gone.

She thought she would never get used to him not being next door. Not walking with her, holding her hand.

But, as the summer months had raced by, she’d found herself thinking about him less and less. And by the time she got to the Grammar School, she hardly ever thought about him at all.

She’d felt guilty about that at first, as though she was letting him down.

But she has new friends now. Her whole life is different.

She looks back again.

Sees Tom’s head drop, his shoulders sag. And she feels that stab again – only this time it feels like shame.


In the two years since he left his home on the Skinners estate, there have not been many easy days for Tom Pushman.

They had left as he’d feared they would. Immediately.

The morning after Charlie had given him the golden thread, his mother – with two hastily packed suitcases and just a few pounds in her purse – had shepherded him out of the house and on to the first bus that arrived at the bottom of the road.

He didn’t know where they were going: neither did she.

For an hour, he sat in desperate silence at the front of the top deck watching the stop-start miles pass.

Disembarking randomly in North London, they tramped the streets that afternoon looking for somewhere to live.

The only place they found was a cheap bedsit in the attic of a dark, creaking Victorian house. Tom’s bed was a sagging sofa that somehow smelled of boiled cabbage and stale cigarettes.

That first night, he lay awake and listened to the unfamiliar noises of the house, to the fretful clawing of the bough of a tree against the skylight.

He was eleven years old: alone, afraid.

He didn’t know where he was; he missed his friends; he missed Charlie; he missed his father. And he was frightened for his mother; frightened of her too, of the distracted, unravelling look in her eyes.

After that everything had happened too fast.


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Within a week he was at a new primary school. In the playground, during the first morning break between lessons, he was knocked down by two bigger boys. In an instant, the whole school formed a baying circle around and the two boys kicked him. Kicked him. Until a teacher appeared and pulled them off.

Bruised and shaking, the next day he’d sat the test, the Eleven Plus.

What had Charlie said? It was the most important thing … like ever.

As the minutes ticked by, he’d stared at the paper, hardly answering a question. It was as if his mind had been emptied: as if everything he knew was left behind at Skinners. As if he had nothing left inside.

He wasn’t surprised when the letter came saying he’d failed.


That summer was long and lonely.

Every day, alone in the bedsit while his mother searched for work, he’d pictured them all in Ruskin Park: Tim Harden, Henry Phippard, Chris Bonfield, George Riggs, Lucy Kennison. And, of course, Charlie.

Most of all, he’d thought of Charlie.

On the bus, he’d slipped the ring of golden thread from his finger and had folded the sheet of paper around it, to keep it safe. Every day that summer, he retrieved it. Held it while the tears came; until they stopped.

Soon enough though, he learned not to cry.

On his first day at the North London Secondary Modern school that September, someone grabbed his satchel and flushed it in the toilet.

Tears now would be fatal, he knew: the other boys would never forgive, never let him forget.

He fought them back: no more tears, he told himself. No more tears.

And then, just when he thought it couldn’t get any worse, it did.

During a lesson that first afternoon, he made the mistake of putting his hand up, answering a question from the teacher – ‘Can anyone tell me the capital of Venezuela?’ – and was greeted by sneers and a clip on his head from the boy at the desk behind him.

After that, he kept his mouth shut.

When he was a Skinners boy, he used to love leaving the estate behind and going to school. But here it was different: no one wanted to be at the school, no one was interested, no one did any work. And the teachers – worn down, defeated – did little about it. The limit of their ambition seemed to be to keep order, to survive another lesson, get through another day.

And that’s how Tom felt too.

He quickly concluded there was no point in even trying at school. Anyway, he told himself, he had enough to think about at home with his mother.

She had become his responsibility.

Flitting in and out of temporary work, she waited tables, washed up, worked in bars, stacked shelves. He, meanwhile, watched over her: watched for what her eyes were telling him, to see how close she was to the precipice.

He did the shopping, the cooking, tidied the bedsit. And he tried to keep their world quiet and ordered for her; to keep her safe.

But he couldn’t.


One day, when Tom got home, his mother wasn’t there. He didn’t go to school the next day: he stayed in the bedsit, waiting for her. Still she didn’t come. For three days, he waited. Afraid. Not knowing what to do.

Finally there was a knock at the door and a social worker was standing nervously on the mat.

There was nothing to worry about, she said quickly.

She was more flustered than he was.

There had been a problem, an incident, she said. In a shop. She paused, considering the best way of putting it, looking for something suitably anodyne. His mother had got upset, she finally said.

Tom closed his eyes. Pictured it. His mother on her knees. Rocking. Crying. He’d seen it before.

She was now in hospital. It was a special hospital – the social worker had laboured the word – and he didn’t have to worry about her any more. She was being cared for – and he was going back to be with his father.

Tom greeted the news of his return with guilty relief.

He was leaving his mother, he hadn’t kept her safe, he felt he’d failed her – but at least now she was being cared for. He’d no longer have to watch her eyes, watch her slipping towards the edge, the void.

And it would be a new beginning for him. There would be a new school that might not be so bad. There were all his old friends to pick up with. There was Charlie.


He’s been back two days now – but it hasn’t worked out how he’d imagined.

He’d thought he would be going back to what he knew; to Skinners, his old house, his old room. But his father had moved to a one-bedroomed maisonette on the other side of the borough. And Tom was back on a sofa again.

On his first day at the new school, they’d given him a second-hand blazer and tie from a cupboard they kept for pupils whose parents couldn’t afford new. The arms of the blazer aren’t long enough: it smells of mothballs. It makes him feel as if everyone is looking at him, judging him.

In the classroom and in the zoo of the playground – swaggering older boys, jeering older girls – no one had spoken to him. Except for one teacher, who yelled at him to get a haircut.

Worse: none of his old friends were there. They’d all managed to get into the Grammar School.

And now Charlie has turned her back on him, walked away.

He doesn’t understand.

He’s come looking for her at the first opportunity, with his heart beating loud. But she’s acted as if she doesn’t know him, doesn’t want to know him.

As if she doesn’t care.

He turns and walks back along the High Street.

No tears, Tom, he tells himself. No tears.



Two more years have passed: it is November 1968

He hadn’t expected to see her. Especially here. This is his place, on his side of town. The Grammar School crowd don’t usually come this way. Not even for the weekly dance.

It is early evening and they are outside the church hall. He’d seen her ahead of him, called her name: this time she had stopped, told her friends to wait for her inside.

They are standing together. Awkwardly, under a streetlamp, on the pavement.

Tom lights a cigarette, offers her one. She shakes her head. He doesn’t know what to say to her.

‘You smoke?’ she says, breaking the silence. She doesn’t mean it to, but it sounds like an accusation.

‘Why shouldn’t I?’ he says, defensively,

‘No reason,’ she says.

It’s obvious they don’t belong together. He’s a fifteen-year-old would-be biker: greased hair, leather jacket, black shirt, jeans. She is Joni Mitchell: flowers in her hair, a white floating blouse, wide flares.

Despite their differences, he thinks she’s beautiful. Just like she always was – even when they were seven years old and used to sit on the kerb together, feet in the gutter, outside her house on Skinners.

He can’t tell her that though. Now that he’s finally with her, he barely has any words at all.

‘What brings you here, Charlie?’ he finally manages, nodding towards the church hall.

She gives him a quick tight smile, glances towards the door: she wants to be inside, she’s not sure why she stopped. He’d caught her by surprise – and she didn’t want to snub him again. But it’s obvious they have nothing to say to each other, nothing in common.

Charlie?’ she says. ‘No one calls me that any more.’

Tom doesn’t know why, but suddenly he’s angry. He fights it back.

‘Sorry,’ he says, hearing the sullen note in his voice.

Charlotte shakes her head: she hadn’t meant to upset him.

‘No, I didn’t mean …’

She gives up.

Inside the hall, the music starts, the dance has begun.

‘Open up your eyes, Then you’ll realize,

Here I stand with my

Everlasting love …’

They both look towards the door, look back, meet each other’s eyes, look away.

‘It’s been a long time,’ Charlotte says.

He nods abruptly; flicks ash from his cigarette.

In the past two years, he’d seen her in the distance from time to time; on the other side of the road, going into a shop or a coffee bar. But he hadn’t tried to speak to her again. Didn’t want to risk it.

She too had seen him – but had crossed the road or gone into a shop to avoid him. She wasn’t sure why. It had just felt too difficult.

He doesn’t say anything. She tries again.

‘I thought you’d be at the Grammar School,’ she said. ‘What did we use to call you?’

He shrugs.

Brainbox!’ she say, delightedly, remembering.

‘Yeah, well,’ Tom says, pulling on his cigarette.

‘What happened, Tom?’ she says. Suddenly she really wants to know, is surprised how much she really cares.

It’s the first time she’s used his name. He looks up.

‘My mum was…’ he begins. And then realises he doesn’t want to talk about it, can’t talk about it.

Charlotte waits – but he doesn’t say anything more.

‘Listen, Tom,’ she says, ‘I’d better go inside now. They’ll be waiting for me.’

Tom nods. He understands – but now that he’s seen her again, now they’ve at least spoken, he wants more. He wants her back. His. Like she always was.

‘Can I see you again?’ he says. ‘Just us. You know … like it used to be.’

Charlotte bites her lip. She doesn’t want to hurt him but it was all too long ago. She has a different life now.

‘I don’t think so, Tom,’ she says. ‘It would be difficult. I’m going out with this boy from the Grammar School, you see, and—’

‘Forget it then,’ he says, feeling the anger surge, sending his cigarette stub arcing into the road, walking away, hands in pockets, shoulders slouched, not looking back.



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Three years later: October, 1971

There’s a sudden rush of autumnal wind whenever the door of the Wimpy Bar on the High Street swings open.

Every new gust is greeted by a shivering, dispirited groan from those huddled inside – and Tom Pushman, flicking his jacket collar up, finds himself hunching further over the corner table. He’s been there for twenty minutes now, nursing a cup of tepid tea and reading the newspaper. He’s not due back at college for another hour.

The door opens again. But this time the groan is cut short – interrupted by a piercing wolf-whistle.

Heads turn: Tom’s amongst them.

He knows her at once – and yet doesn’t know her.

She looks … she looks … amazing. Like she’s walked straight off a magazine cover. Long glossy hair; Afghan coat; a tasselled bag carelessly over her shoulder; knee high boots.

Another whistle – which she dismisses with an irritated toss of her head.

‘Charlie Clarke?’ Tom says.

And then he corrects himself: ‘Sorry … I mean … Charlotte Clarke.’

She looks across to the corner, wrinkles her brow. And then she recognises him. Just.

‘Tom Pushman?’

He nods, smiles. They both laugh.

‘Come and sit with me,’ he says, half-standing, pulling out a chair.

It feels so natural.

Whatever tension there was last time they met has gone. It was so long ago – that must be it, Tom thinks. Three years? They were just kids. Fifteen? He’s older now. Wiser.

‘Well,’ she says, coming over, glancing at her watch, ‘I’m meeting some of the girls. You know, from school. But I’ve got a few minutes.’

She’s astonished at how pleased she is to see him. Last time had been awful – outside some disco? – but now it’s like seeing someone she was really fond of a very long time ago, that she’s delighted to meet again.

Maybe, she thinks, she’s getting sentimental about Skinners already! And she hasn’t even left it behind yet. Not until Monday.

She sits down.

‘Tea?’ Tom says.

She nods.

He gestures to the waitress: teas, two.

‘Wow,’ Tom says, looking at her. ‘You look fantastic, Charlotte.’

She blushes – and she can’t remember the last time she blushed. He’d taken her by surprise. And just when she was thinking how tall and good looking he’d grown up to be: quite the Robert Redford.

‘Thank you!’ she says, recovering herself. ‘And it’s Charlie now.’

Tom shakes his head. Smiles.


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‘I can’t keep up,’ he says, knowing how ridiculous it is. Can’t keep up? It’s only the second time he’s spoken to her since they were eleven years old.

‘I know,’ she laughs, ‘Charlotte was just a phase.’

He’s glad: Charlotte was so unnatural, clumsy on his tongue. It didn’t suit her.

‘What are you up to now?’ she says.

Hesitatingly, he tells her. About the apprenticeship, the day release classes at college.

‘Painting and decorating,’ he says.

She’s shocked; tries not to show it. She still has him somewhere in her mind as the Professor, Brainbox, always top of the class. A decorator? Like her dad?

‘What about you?’ he says, changing the subject.

He doesn’t want to talk about the apprenticeship. He’d left school two years before without a qualification to his name, just glad to be out of it. He hadn’t a clue what he was going to do: it was his father who’d pushed him into it.

‘Me?’ Charlie says, hearing a note of something like guilt in her voice, something like embarrassment. She doesn’t want to sound like she’s showing off.

‘Yes, you!’ Tom says, laughing again.

‘I’m off to college,’ she says.


‘Well, university,’ she says shyly. ‘I’m doing English at Bristol.’

Whenever Tom had thought about her over the years – and he’d never been able to put her far from his mind, he’d thought about her often – he hadn’t anticipated this, hadn’t considered it as a possibility. Why would he? Apart from a few of the teachers at school, he’d never met anyone who had been to university. He’s disappointed she’s going away, hurt; even though he never sees her, he has somehow always taken comfort from knowing she’s there, somewhere close by.

‘Wow,’ he says, not knowing what else to say.

‘I know!’ she says, eyes wide, alive, dancing. ‘I can’t really believe it. And I’ve got all this reading to do.’

She fishes in her bag, pulls out a printed sheet of paper, hands it to him.

‘It’s the reading list they sent me,’ she says, grimacing. ‘Scary.’

He starts to read; recognises nothing.

‘Yeah, scary,’ he says.

She looks at her watch again, looks to the door. The girls will be here soon. And although it has been good to see Tom , it’s obvious they haven’t got much to talk about. Not any more. It’s getting awkward again. Tense.

She thinks of a way of talking about something else.

‘How’s your mum and dad?’ she asks.

Tom flinches.

‘Dad’s much the same,’ he says. ‘Still goes over to the Skinners Arms.’

‘And your mum?’ she says.

‘I don’t see her,’ he says, hesitating again. ‘Not often. She’s been in this … this hospital … for years. In North London.’

She’s never got out: never will, the doctors say. Tom doesn’t go often, it’s too difficult, painful – he doesn’t know her now and, with all the medication, she hardly recognises him. The troubled look has gone from her eyes. But now there’s nothing there. Nothing.

He looks at the table, lifts his cup, sips his tea. He doesn’t know why it’s so difficult to talk to Charlie. It’s as if everything he says makes him sound apologetic, like he’s second rate – third rate – and she’s above him, out of reach, unattainable. He even feels he has to apologise for his mother.

‘Your poor mum,’ Charlie says.

They fall silent. He sees her glance at her watch again. She quickly drinks her tea.

‘It’s been nice seeing you, Tom,’ she says. ‘But the girls will be here soon – I’d better get a table.’

‘Have this one,’ Tom says, standing up. ‘I’ve got to get back to college.’

He doesn’t know what to do. Kiss her on the cheek? Shake her hand?

‘Well, good luck with everything,’ he says.

‘And you,’ she says, standing up, pecking him on the cheek.

‘Have fun … at university,’ he says.

She laughs.

‘I’ll try,’ she says.

‘Perhaps I could come and visit?’ he says

He doesn’t know why he said it, where it came from. He hasn’t seen her for years and suddenly he’s talking about visiting her? He can hear how ridiculous, needy, weird it sounds.

Visit? Charlie is alarmed.

‘Perhaps,’ she says, too quickly; glancing at her watch again; looking pleadingly towards the door.



Seven years later: Winter, 1978

Tom Pushman and his wife are negotiating the High Street – it’s not easy, especially pushing the buggy. It’s slippery underfoot, treacherous: the snow that had fallen over the weekend has been slow to clear, has turned to blackened ice.

‘Whoa!’ Margaret says, feeling her feet slide.

Tom takes her arm, steadies her.

‘Here, let me take the buggy, Mags,’ he says.

They make their way slowly, laughing at their shuffling, halting progress: Tom pushing two-year-old Christopher in the buggy, Margaret hanging tight to his arm.

At the greengrocer’s, Tom waits outside with Christopher while Margaret joins the queue inside.

Taking off his gloves, he lights a cigarette, sends a plume of smoke into the chill air. He bends to check on Christopher in the buggy; straightens the boy’s woollen bobble hat, makes a face, makes him laugh. And then, returning to his cigarette, he stands, stamping his feet

It’s then that he sees her.

Coming round the corner, coming towards him on the arm of a man in a tailored Crombie overcoat and leather gloves. She is wearing a knee-length camel coat, fur ear muffs and a long wrapped-around scarf.

Tom isn’t sure what to do, what would be best. He’s embarrassed; doesn’t want another encounter like before. Should he ignore her, pretend he hasn’t seen her?

Charlie solves the problem for him.

‘Tom Pushman!’ she says, delightedly.

He meets her eye, smiles.

‘Charlie Clarke!’ he says, dropping his cigarette, grinding it beneath is heel.

Charlotte, I’m afraid,’ she says, laughing.

She comes slip-sliding towards to him, puts her mittened hands on his shoulders to keep herself from falling. He bends; she kisses him quickly on the cheek.


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‘I was just talking about you!’ she says. ‘Well, not about you exactly, but about Skinners … what it was like living there.’

‘Grim,’ Tom says. ‘But good times too.’

‘That’s what I was telling Colin! That’s exactly what I said! This is Colin, by the way. My fiancée.’

It had been a strangely emotional day. Although she’d left seven years before, had never really come home after university, her engagement to Colin felt like a final separation from her childhood. She’d wanted to share it with him, make him understand. But getting out of his car in Skinners, he’d looked what he was: a fish out of water.

Nodding a brief greeting to Colin, Tom looks at her appraisingly; she’s still recognisably Charlie, but everything about her seems brand new, polished, confident. Even her voice has changed. There’s no Skinners left in her.

‘It’s good to see you, Charlotte,’ he says. ‘What are you up to these days?’

‘Gosh, where to start?’ she laughs. ‘We’ve been travelling quite a bit – Europe, Asia, the States. We’re in Fulham now. I’m working in a gallery, Colin’s a solicitor and—’

Tom doesn’t want to hear about Colin.

‘A gallery?’ he says. ‘Sound grand.’

‘Oh, it’s just a small place,’ she says. ‘But we’ve got some interesting pieces. You should come and have a look.’

She kicks herself as soon as she says it. Does he look as though he goes to galleries?

‘Yes, I’ll do that,’ Tom says, knowing he never will.

She changes the subject.

‘What about you?’ she says.

He’s suddenly conscious of the way he’s dressed. He’s taken an hour off work to help Margaret with the shopping. Beneath his paint-splattered Parka, he’s still wearing his overalls and working boots.

‘Oh, just the same,’ he says.

She spots the buggy, glad of the distraction.

‘Who’s this little chap?’

They bend together.

‘This is Christopher,’ Tom says.

He doesn’t know why but he’s uncomfortable, ashamed. Ashamed of his own son? No, that can’t be it. Ashamed of his life, more like: of being twenty-five, paint under his finger nails, and already middle-aged, settled, dull. Never having been to Europe, Asia, the States.

‘And how old is Christopher?’ she says.

Tom turns, meets her eyes. In all the growing up together, he’s never noticed how blue they are. Their heads are close: he can smell her perfume, see her breath, misty in the cold.

‘He’s a terrible two,’ he says.

Charlotte takes a mitten from her hand, runs a finger over the boy’s cheek. He has the look of his father, she thinks. When he was a boy.

Colin sighs, stamps his feet behind them.

‘Sorry,’ he says, impatiently pointing to his watch, ‘but we need to be going.’

At that moment, Margaret comes through the shop door, brown paper carrier bag in hand.

Still bending beside Charlotte, Tom looks up. And now he feels guilty, as well as ashamed; as if he’s been caught, doing something illicit.

He stands quickly. So too does Charlotte.

‘Mags,’ he says. ‘This is Charlotte and ….’

He pretends to forget Colin’s name.

‘Colin,’ Charlotte says, smiling.

She likes the look of Mags at once; likes the way she takes Tom’s arm, claiming him. She would do the same if Tom was her man.

‘Charlie … Charlotte … and I used to be neighbours,’ Tom says.

‘A very long time ago!’ Charlotte says.

Mags looks at Tom, looks at Charlotte: a question in her eyes.

‘Nice to meet you,’ she says, taking Charlotte’s offered hand.

Tom can see Margaret hold herself taller. He feels a rush of desperate pride for her. He knows that, in an instant, she will have taken in how well Charlotte is dressed, how well she speaks – and yet she hasn’t missed a beat, has refused to be cowed.

Colin stamps his feet again; it’s obvious he wants to be going. Tom isn’t letting him off that easily.

‘So what brings you back down here, Charlotte?’ he says.

‘Just introducing Colin to Mum and Dad. Showing him where I grew up. It’s been quite a trip down memory lane and—.’

Colin interrupts.

‘Charlotte, we really must be going!’ he says.

Charlotte shrugs an apology: she quickly shakes Margaret’s hand again, kisses Tom on the cheek.

Colin says a curt goodbye.

‘Goodbye, Tom,’ Charlotte says as Colin begins to lead her, slipping unsteadily away, over the ice.

‘Nice to meet you, Mags!’ she says, over her shoulder, looking back. ‘Two peas out of the same pod, we were, Tom and me!’

Margaret laughs.

‘Well, no one would guess it now!’ she calls after her.


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Spring, 2013: thirty five years have passed

Tom had waited outside in the drenching rain until the last moment: he’d taken shelter under the dripping sway of a weeping willow and had been the last to go into the crematorium.

Dabbing the rain from his silvered hair and his face with a handkerchief, he’d sat alone at the back.

He’d kept the handkerchief with him when the service began: he needed it. No more tears, he’d spent a lifetime telling himself. But he’d cried for her; Charlie’s mum.

There was no one he’d known longer in the world – and he’d grown close to her in the last fifteen years or so, after his own parents had gone. First Mum, who never did get the spark of life back into her eyes, never did make it out of hospital: then Dad, the cigarettes and the beer catching up with him.

He’d had no tears for them. Not because he didn’t love them, didn’t care – but because he’d done all his crying long ago. When he was eleven years old.

She was a good sort; Charlie’s mum, Mrs Clarke.

She’d talk for hours about the way life used to be when she was a girl, growing up. And about when he and Charlie were young. He’d heard all her stories a hundred times. He wished he could hear them again.

He’d miss her.

More than that: her going felt like the end of something solid, something sustaining in his life. It was the last connection with his childhood, with Skinners. With Charlie.

As the service comes to an end, he wonders again whether he should have come. He isn’t family, he doesn’t really belong here – and he doesn’t want to intrude.

He hopes he can slip away unseen at the end.


It hasn’t worked out like that. There had been no alternative but to follow everyone else out through to the garden of remembrance.

The rain has stopped and he’s face to face with her now.

‘You won’t remember me,’ he says.

Charlie shakes her head. He’s the last in a long line she’s had to greet, to thank for coming. Towards the end, the faces had begun to blur. There is something about him that she recognises – but she can’t place it.

‘Tom,’ he says, softly. ‘Tom Pushman.’

Her hand goes to her mouth.

‘Tom?’ she says. ‘I’m so sorry, I didn’t—’

He stops her with a smile.

‘It’s been a long time,’ he says. ‘A lifetime.’

Thirty five years since they last met – and then only briefly. Nearly fifty years since they walked home from school hand in hand.

She matches his smile and he sees the girl in her that he remembers; that he’s always carried so carefully in his mind. Time has been kind to her.

‘She meant a lot to me, your mum,’ he says. ‘I went to see her every week.’

Again she shakes her head. How can she not have known that?

‘Mum never told me,’ she says.

‘No,’ he says, smiling again.

He looks into her eyes; the deepest blue.

‘It’s good to see you, Charlotte,’ he says. ‘Whatever the circumstances.’

Charlie,’ she says. ‘I’m Charlie now’


He hadn’t intended to go on to the Skinners Arms but Charlie had insisted.

‘Mum would have wanted you here,’ she said.

It has been a good do, Mrs Clarke would have approved: beer and sandwiches, sherry for the ladies. All the old stories, plenty of laughter. One of her friends from the Social Club has even sung in a high wavering voice.

‘We’ll meet again,

Don’t know where, don’t know when …’

There wasn’t a dry eye in the house.

Tom had tried to leave an hour ago. Charlie wouldn’t let him.

‘Stay,’ she said, touching his arm. ‘We haven’t talked.’

She’s been too busy with her mother’s old friends, listening to their tales of her when she was young. Throwing her head back and laughing. She’d been dreading this day, particularly this part of it. But it’s what her mother had wanted.

And she’d been right.

‘A knees-up at the Skinners,’ she’d said. ‘Do everyone a power of good.’

Well it isn’t exactly a knees-up, but it’s so much better than Charlie had expected. She’s enjoying it.

From time to time, she’s caught his eye and smiled.

Tom Pushman, who would have believed it? She’s intrigued. The years show on him, of course they do – but, now she’s able to look at him, he’s still unmistakably Tom. And his age suits him: he looks so … so distinguished.

She’s been trying remember his wife’s name. But it’s gone. And he had a son, didn’t he? His name’s gone too.


The last of her mother’s friends have left, they are alone now; sitting at a sticky table, in the corner of the snug bar.

‘So you went to see Mum?’ Charlie says.

She still doesn’t understand why she didn’t know.

Tom nods.

‘I saw her most weeks,’ he says. ‘After your dad passed away, I did things for her in the house. Fixed things. A bit of decorating. That sort of thing.’

He’s self-conscious, careful: still getting used to the idea of being with her, talking to her. It seems so unlikely, after all this time.

‘She never told me,’ Charlie says.

‘That’s because I asked her not to,’ Tom says.

Charlie frowns.

‘But why?’

Tom shrugs; searches for the words.

‘I guess I didn’t want you to think that I was clinging on.’

Another frown.

‘Clinging on?’

‘Clinging on to the past,’ he says. ‘Clinging on to you.’

She blushes: not for the first time in her life, he has taken her by surprise.

They have talked for an hour. More. She doesn’t know why – but she has told him everything about herself. There’s something about him that makes it easy to talk. Or perhaps she’s had one glass of sherry too many? That must be it. Anyway, she’s told him things that she hasn’t spoken about with anyone. It’s all just come tumbling out.

She’s talked about Colin, leaving her after twenty years of marriage, going off with someone half her age; about her distance from her two boys – Oliver and Harry; how Colin had insisted they went to boarding school, how she’d felt she had begun losing them from that moment. She sees them only a couple of times a year now. About how everything fell apart when Colin left; the emptiness in her life that she’s now filled with opening her own gallery, with trips to the theatre, good friends in Fulham.

And all of that has led her back to talking about her mother.

‘I’m not sure I was ever much of a daughter,’ she says. ‘I was even worse when I was with Colin. He never wanted to come down here.’

Tom shakes his head.

‘She thought the world of you,’ he says.

‘No,’ she says. ‘Do you know, growing up I was ashamed of them – Mum and Dad? Isn’t that terrible? I hated coming from a council estate – especially Skinners.’

Tom tries to say something. She won’t let him.

‘At school, I wouldn’t bring the girls back. I even made Mum out to be this awful old dragon who wouldn’t let me have friends, wouldn’t let me go to parties.’

‘Not go to parties?’ Tom says.

‘I never had anything to wear – couldn’t afford it. So I used her as an excuse – this dragon mother I’d invented.’

Tom smiles.

‘That’s not so bad, Charlie. You were just—’

She doesn’t let him finish.

‘I was just an awful snob. That’s what I was.’

‘No, Charlie, it’s—’

She pauses. Looks down at the table. She suddenly needs to tell him, to explain.

‘I’ve got a confession to make,’ she says. ‘I was ashamed of you too. That’s why I wouldn’t talk to you when you came back.’

He touches her arm.

‘It’s OK,’ he says. ‘I know. I understand.’

She looks up.

‘What happened to me?’ she says, with a rueful smile. ‘It’s as if somewhere along the way I forgot who I was.’

She’d been thinking about this as she’d listened to her mother’s friends. They seemed so real, at ease with themselves – whereas everything in her life seemed insubstantial, false, brittle.

‘Don’t get me wrong, going to the Grammar School, going off to university, was great. It was the best thing that ever happened to me … but it sort of changed me.’

‘Changed you?’

‘It took me away from what I knew, where I came from,’ she says. ‘And since then, I’ve never truly felt … how can I put it? … never felt that I really belonged. Anywhere.’

She’s conscious of the fact that she’s talking too much, sounding ridiculous. But it’s as if she needs to try to explain it – to herself as much as to Tom.

‘Do you know something, Tom Pushman?’ she says.

‘What’s that, Charlie Clarke?’ Tom says.

‘You won’t believe this,’ she says, ‘And I know I’m being a sentimental old fool …’

‘Not so much of the old,’ he says, with an encouraging smile, ‘and I think you’re allowed to be sentimental – on this of all days.’

She hesitates. She has had one glass of sherry too many, hasn’t she? She wishes she hadn’t begun.

She takes a deep breath, starts again.

‘I know I’m being ridiculous and sentimental’ she says ‘but, sitting here now, it makes me think that the only time I was ever truly happy was …’

Suddenly, from nowhere, she’s fighting tears. Tears for her mother; tears for a young girl who used to sit on a kerb and turn cartwheels in the park.

‘… was when I was eleven years old and walking home from school with you.’



Two days later

It was only afterwards that Charlie realised that not only had she talked far too much, he had said so little.

She’d learned that he and Mags had divorced not long after their son, Christopher, had got married.

‘I was never good for her,’ he said. ‘Not really. It was OK to begin with – but we wanted different things. She deserved better.’

He didn’t elaborate; Charlie hadn’t liked to ask.

Mags had met someone else, remarried; he was happy for her. He saw Christopher regularly; they went to football together.

Beyond that she knew nothing of his life.

She’s cross with herself at how much she told him; how much of herself she’d given away. Cross too that she had been maudlin, self-pitying at the end. She’d made such a fool of herself – poor little rich girl has lost her roots – how absurd it must have sounded compared to his life; she remembered her dad, the daily struggle it was for a painter and decorator just to get by, pay the bills.

For the past two days, she has been going through her mother’s house; getting it ready to be cleared, unearthing dog-eared photographs, faded letters, memory-laden trinkets and treasures. It has been exhausting, emotionally draining.

She’s glad to be out of the house and in a taxi now – although she wishes she was on her way back to Fulham and not to him.

But there’s nothing for it – when they’d left the Skinners Arms on the day of the funeral, they’d arranged the time and the day, he’d given her his address but no telephone number. She has to go through with it.

Almost as soon as she’d got back to the house that evening, she’d regretted agreeing to meet him again.

Stupid! What were they going to talk about now? They’d exhausted all the childhood nostalgia; she should have left it at that. Fond memories. Old friends.

She’d tried to say this to him, as soon as he’d suggested she come to his house for a meal.

‘It’s been great seeing you, Tom,’ she said. ‘But our lives are so different now. I don’t think we’ve got anything in common and—’

He’d interrupted her, made a joke of it.

‘Paint!’ he said.

Paint?’ she said.

‘That’s what we’ve got in common,’ he said. ‘I paint walls. You sell paintings.’

She hadn’t laughed – because it seemed to sum up too exactly the gulf between them. But in the end, her middle-class manners had won the day: not wanting to offend him, she’d given in.

In the back of the taxi now, she closes her eyes. When she gets to his house, she’ll apologise, make an excuse – she’s got a headache, she’s not feeling well – go home to Fulham.

The taxi turns a corner to a tree-lined avenue of tall detached houses and crunching gravel drives. The car slows.

Charlie’s eyes open: she speaks to the driver.

‘No,’ she says, ‘not here. We want the Skinners estate.’

Tom had told her that where he lived now was just around the corner from the Skinners Arms.

The driver shakes his head.

‘It’s the address you gave me, love,’ he says, handing back the slip of paper that Tom had given to her.

When Tom had given her the address, she’d put it straight in her handbag. She checks it now: there’s no mistake. Tom, lives on the Grove.

She remembers. They used to walk through here, saying goodbye to all the other children: Tim Harden, Henry Phippard, Chris Bonfield, George Riggs, Lucy Kennison.

She smiles. Who would have thought that Tom Pushman would end up here? He’s done better than she’d imagined. Good for him.

‘Can you wait for me, driver?’ she says, as they reach the house.

‘I’ll wait for you forever, sweetheart,’ he says, grinning, pointing to the running meter.


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At the door of the house, she hesitates, composes herself, rings the bell.

It opens at once. Tom greets her with a wide smile.

‘Tom, listen, I—’

He doesn’t let her finish.

‘I know what you’re going to say,’ he says. ‘I know you can’t stay – but come in for a cup of tea at least.’

He gives her no chance to argue, setting off down the drive, leaving her on the doorstep, paying the taxi.

‘Tom, I—’ she tries again when he comes back up the drive.

He raises a hand as if he’s halting traffic, stops her.

‘Charlie Clarke,’ he says, laughing, ‘I’m not taking ‘no’ for an answer. Not this time.’

He ushers her in.

The hallway is bright and embracingly warm; light plays through the stained glass of the door. The walls are hung with gold-framed lithographs of Dickensian London, a Persian carpet sits thick on the burnished parquet flooring. There’s a rich pervasive smell of beeswax polish.

Tom sees Charlie’s eyes grow wide. She’s impressed. He’d hoped she would be.

‘It’s not as grand as it looks,’ he says, playing it down. ‘It’s flats. I’ve got the ground floor.’

He leads the way.

As the door to the flat opens, Charlie can’t help herself.

She gasps.

In her mind, she’s had Tom in a council house on Skinners, much like her mother’s: a dingy living room, worn and threadbare; a kitchen, confined and unwelcoming.

Not this.

The room is high-ceilinged and light floods through a sweeping bay of silk-draped windows. The carpet is sinkingly sumptuous; the furniture startlingly white, sleek, low and modern. It’s a room from the pages of a Sunday supplement, from Ideal Home. It makes Charlie’s terrace house in Fulham seem cramped and old-fashioned in comparison.

‘Tom, I—’

Again she gets no further.

‘I owe you an apology,’ he says.

She struggles to understand.

‘An apology?’ she says.

He nods.

‘I let you think I was still in the painting game,’ he says.

‘You’re not?’

He shakes his head.

‘Make yourself at home,’ he says. ‘Take a look around. I’ll get the tea.’

Charlie wanders the room, trying to make sense of it. Tom? Living here? Like this?

She calls to him in the kitchen: she wants to check her make-up, her hair.

‘Is it OK if I use the—’

His voice sings back.

‘Through the door. First on the right.’

She goes through to a wide corridor. But instead of going to the right, she pauses at the door opposite. It’s half open; curious, she pushes it wider, steps in.

In the centre of the room, where the sunlight spills through the open window, is an imposing mahogany desk with a leather captain’s chair. But it’s not the desk that is the most striking feature of the room – it’s the walls. Floor to ceiling, they are lined with bookshelves. And every shelf is crammed to overflowing with books.

‘You’ve taken a wrong turn,’ Tom says.

His voice behind her makes Charlie jump.

‘I’m sorry, Tom,’ she says, flustered. ‘I wasn’t being—’

He smiles.

‘I’m glad you’ve seen it,’ he says. ‘My den.’

He can’t help the note of pride in his voice. All these years and he still hasn’t really got used to it.

‘But I don’t understand,’ Charlie says. ‘From painting and decorating? From Skinners? To this?’

Tom leads her by the arm to a Chesterfield sofa in the bay of the window. They sit together, half-turned towards one another.

‘It’s simple,’ he says. ‘It took me too many years – but I finally sorted myself out.’

Charlie shakes her head.

‘I’m sorry,’ she says. ‘I don’t understand.’

Tom sits back, considering how to explain, where to begin.

‘For years I had a chip on my shoulder the size of the Albert Hall,’ he says. ‘I blamed everything and everyone. I blamed my mum most of all.’

Charlie is still struggling to see where he’s going.

‘Blamed?’ she says. ‘What for?’

‘For me not having a future. For leaving school at sixteen with not a qualification to my name. For—’

It’s Charlie’s turn to interrupt. She gets it now.

‘You should never have gone to that awful school, Tom – you didn’t belong there,’ she says. ‘You should have been at the Grammar School with the rest of us. Everything would have been different then.’

He shakes his head.

‘That’s what I thought,’ he says. ‘That’s why I always blamed my mum so much. It was simple – because she was ill and took me away, I failed the Eleven Plus. If it hadn’t been for her, my life would have been different. That’s what I always told myself. It took me years to realise how wrong I was.’


‘It wasn’t my poor old mum’s fault, Charlie,’ Tom says. ‘Things go wrong in people’s lives. Of course they do.’

‘So what was it then?’ Charlie says. ‘What was to blame?’

Even now Tom can feel the old anger, taste it: children separated like sheep and goats, their lives determined at eleven by a test. It was an outrage. A bloody outrage. He fights the anger back.

‘It was the system,’ he says simply. ‘It was that bloody test.’



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If all the schools had been the same – if there had been a comprehensive system back then – he explains, he might have struggled for a few months because of what was happening to his mum. But, given time and encouragement, he would have got back on track. got his O levels, his A levels, gone to university.

And there were so many hundreds of thousands like him. Written off as failures – writing themselves off as failures – at the age of eleven. It was a national scandal, he says. A crime against children. A form of abuse.

Charlie can feel her eyes filling. She understands like never before.

She’s spent her life being grateful for the opportunity the Grammar School gave her – for the way it lifted her out of Skinners and on to university, to the life she now has. She’s always been uneasily aware though that there was another side to the story, of course. But she’s never seen the lifetime of anger that went with it. The hurt. The damage.

‘And now?’ she says, looking around the room.

Tom laughs.

‘You’re to blame for all this, you know,’ he says.

Me?’ Charlie says.

He turns to the bookshelf behind the sofa. She follows his eyes.

‘Do you recognise these?’ he says.

Charlie glances along the shelf.

‘I know some of them,’ she says.

Tom laughs again.

‘Shame on you, Charlie Clarke!’ he says. ‘You should know them all!’

Baffled, Charlie studies the shelf again.

‘Do you remember when we bumped into each other at the Wimpy?’ Tom says. ‘Before you went up to university?’

Charlie nods. She has a distant memory of it.

‘You showed me your reading list,’ Tom says. ‘And I then proceeded to walk off with it by mistake.’

Charlie does remember hunting everywhere for the list; blaming her mum for throwing it away, panicking before she got to university.

‘So that’s where it went!’ she says.

‘I’ve still got it,’ Tom says. ‘It’s in my desk. I’ll return it later.’

As the years had gone by, the distance between him and Mags had grown, he says. It wasn’t her fault: he was angry at the world, unhappy with everything in his life, she could do nothing right, nothing to please him. When Christopher left home, shortly afterwards so did he.

He’d found himself a cheap rented room and, with no money and nothing else to do, he’d joined the library and started to read. He remembered Charlie’s list of books – and he set about reading every one of them. Cover to cover. It was tough going at first. But, as the months went by, it got easier.

‘You’ve read them all?’ Charlie says, amazed.

‘Every single one,’ he says. ‘Haven’t you?’

She laughs.

‘No way,’ she says. ‘I was far too busy having fun at university. I read as few as I could get away with!’

Once he’d started reading, he’d found he couldn’t stop. He enrolled at night school – did his O levels, A levels.

And then he carried on.

‘At the age of forty six,’ he says. ‘I finally made it to university – got my degree, did my masters, got a doctorate.’

‘Wow!’ Charlie says.

‘Wow indeed, Charlie Clarke,’ he says. Remembering all the years of study; giving his life to it; loving every minute.

‘And now?’ Charlie says, looking around. ‘All this?’

‘Now?’ Tom says. ‘Do you remember what you all called me at primary school?’

Brainbox?’ Charlie says, mystified.

‘No,’ Tom says. ‘There was something else.’

‘Professor?’ Charlie says.

Tom nods.

‘You’re a professor!’ she says.

‘Sort of,’ he says, suddenly self-conscious again. ‘Senior lecturer actually – but on my way.’

‘Wow!’ Charlie says again.

She’s got stuck on the word.

There’s a silence between them as she tries to digest it – what he’s made of himself, how hard it must have been. She feels inadequate beside him. Somehow shallow. Almost a fraud. She’d always been so proud of making it to university, but there was no comparison. Not with this. And she’d made assumptions about him too. Such wrong assumptions.

Tom shifts from the sofa, stands.

‘Wait here a moment, Charlie,’ he says.

He goes across to his desk and from the top drawer, he retrieves a sheet of paper and an envelope.

‘Here,’ he says, sitting down again. ‘Your reading list.’

She laughs as she takes it, feeling suddenly like the girl she was when she held it last.

‘And here,’ Tom says. ‘Is something else for you.’

He hands her the envelope.

‘What’s this, Tom?’ she says lightly.

But he’s serious now.

‘Do you remember the day I left Skinners?’ he says.

She can see them standing together outside his gate. She can remember the way she felt. The shock. The heartbreak.

‘You gave me something that day,’ he says.

She looks puzzled.

‘A piece of golden thread,’ he says.

It comes back to her. How could she have forgotten?

‘I tied it in a bow!’ she says. ‘We both did.’

She can see it so clearly.

He points to the envelope.

‘Open it, Charlie,’ he says, gently.

She holds her breath, opens the envelope. The thread is there. Perfect. The bow still intact.

She holds it in the palm of her hand.

‘Oh, Tom,’ she says.

There are too many feelings. They defeat her words.

She wants to tell him about her thread. How she wore it until it fell apart, fell away. She can’t. She doesn’t trust herself not to cry.

He reaches across, takes her hand. She lets him.

‘I know this is going to sound daft,’ he says. ‘But I have a confession to make, Charlie.’

‘A confession?’ she manages to say.

He steadies himself, meets her eye.

‘I’ve always loved you, Charlie Clarke,’ he says, smiling.

She’d known what he was going to say a split second before he said it.

‘Tom, I—’

He stops her.

‘Do you know what I think, Charlie?’

She shakes her head.

‘I think if it wasn’t for that bloody test, there would have been a chance for us,’ he says.

The tears are coming now. She lets them run.

‘I’m not sure, Tom,’ she says. ‘It was so long ago and we were just children and—’

‘No,’ he says. ‘I’m sure.’

He squeezes her hand.

‘But if I’ve learned nothing else in this life,’ he says, ‘I’ve learned this one thing.’

‘One thing?’ she says.

He nods.

‘You must never give up hope,’ he says.

It’s only now that she knows what’s coming.

He takes another steadying breath. He’s waited so long for this.

‘Do you thinks it’s too late for us, Charlie Clarke?’ he says.

She can’t see him through her tears.

‘Do you?’ he says.


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73 Responses to The Test

  1. Dorothy King May 23, 2017 at 12:04 pm #

    This was so moving, I am so glad it was a happy ending, I hung on every word

  2. Margaret Camus May 22, 2017 at 12:23 pm #

    Loved it and it had echoes for me. Although I passed the test and refused to go to high school. I achieved my using qualifications with 4 kids and no support from my then huband. I continued learning and now have a Master’s Degree in Women’s Studies. Thank you for the story xx

  3. Kath Rennie January 12, 2017 at 6:29 pm #

    Loved …The Test!

  4. Marina Robbins January 7, 2017 at 5:23 pm #

    lovely story one world two paths becoming one world again such a lovely read.

    • Mark Haysom January 8, 2017 at 9:29 am #

      Thank you, Marina. That’s very kind.

  5. SandraKnowles September 27, 2016 at 6:21 am #

    Absolutely loved this Mark, it was wonderful seeing Charlie and Tom change and grow over the years. It was their destiny that should finally come together, from the tying of the ‘wedding’ ring. to the passing of the envelope. Wonderful read. It had me hooked from start to finish.

    • Mark Haysom September 27, 2016 at 7:06 am #

      Thank you, Sandra. It’s great to have such positive feedback. You can find all five of my free short stories here And, perhaps, you might also like to try my two novels, LOVE, LOVE ME DO and the sequel, IMAGINE.

  6. Dorothy LeMoignnan September 26, 2016 at 11:16 am #

    I have come across you by chance .so glad I did . I’m 76 and reading the Test was like reliving my own .I was just like Charlie ashamed of my background ,my dad was painter & decorator .But I told people I worked with he he was Interior Decorator . I was such a snob .Im glad through circumstances I was brought down to earth .Live in council house ,work in community Voluntary sword etc., Reading your story has made me realise wouldn’t have been happy leading any other life .posh house etc Thank you

    • Mark Haysom September 27, 2016 at 7:05 am #

      Thank you so much, Dorothy. I’m glad my story meant something to you. You can find all five of my free short stories here And, perhaps, you might also like to try my two novels, LOVE, LOVE ME DO and the sequel, IMAGINE.

  7. Sybil September 25, 2016 at 1:18 am #

    Loved it had to read to the end but now time for sleep it is 2.15in the morning thank you for such a good book

    • Mark Haysom September 25, 2016 at 8:32 am #

      Thank you so much, Sybil. Sorry to have kept you up so late! You can find all five of my free short stories here And, perhaps, you might also like to try my two novels, LOVE, LOVE ME DO and the sequel, IMAGINE.

  8. Carmel Hookham September 13, 2016 at 10:48 pm #

    What a lovely, poignant story…so many emotions, and so descriptive that I felt I was there!
    I was so engrossed, I have just realised it is almost midnight! It has been a long time since I was so captivated by a story and not being able to put it down until the end…Thank you Mark. I am looking forward to reading many more!

    • Mark Haysom September 14, 2016 at 6:53 am #

      Thank you so much, Carmel. You will find all five of my free short stories here And, perhaps, you might also like to try my two novels, LOVE, LOVE ME DO and the sequel, IMAGINE.

  9. Joan September 11, 2016 at 1:16 pm #

    This story was wonderful brought back so many memories,I loved it could not put it down .

    • Mark Haysom September 12, 2016 at 7:17 am #

      I’m glad you enjoyed THE TEST, Joan, and that it brought back memories. If you haven’t come across them already, you’ll find all five of my free short stories here

  10. Janet Sackett August 16, 2016 at 9:10 pm #

    Another lovely story Mark

  11. jean bennett August 12, 2016 at 1:52 am #

    lovely story like a good book i couldnt put it down love it thank you x

    • Mark Haysom August 12, 2016 at 7:13 am #

      It’s great that you enjoyed THE TEST, Jean. If you haven’t come across them already, you’ll find all five of my free short stories here

      • Peggy McCloud August 22, 2016 at 2:32 pm #

        I loved it.couldnt put it down. Thank you
        Peggy McCloud x

        • Mark Haysom August 24, 2016 at 7:54 am #

          I’m glad you enjoyed THE TEST, Peggy. If you haven’t come across them already, you’ll find all five of my free short stories here

  12. Shelagh Drury July 31, 2016 at 6:49 pm #

    enjoyed the story so much, read it right through, was very engrossing, lovely
    Thank you

    • Mark Haysom August 1, 2016 at 7:22 am #

      I’m so glad you enjoyed THE TEST, Shelagh, and thank you for your kind comments. If you haven’t come across them already, you’ll find more stories here

  13. Mojisola Odusanwo July 24, 2016 at 12:56 pm #

    The Test. …is a very good story line. I enjoyed it and so happy that both characters eventually meet again to find love and happiness they both deserved. Well done.

  14. Sue Oxley July 17, 2016 at 8:40 am #

    Wow, what a story,had me from the start,couldn’t stop reading even let my coffee go cold ,wonderful,thank you.

    • Mark Haysom July 17, 2016 at 8:55 am #

      I’m glad you enjoyed THE TEST, Sue, and thank you for your kind comments. If you haven’t come across them already, you’ll find more stories here

  15. Josie Mitchell July 12, 2016 at 1:25 am #

    Wow what a fabulous story , so real in the telling it was like reading the diaries of their lives. I loved every word and once started I couldn’t put it down.
    Thank you Mark Haysom

  16. Kathleen Sambridge July 10, 2016 at 4:12 am #

    Loved “The Test”. I too was sick on the day of the test – too anxious. Had opportunity to sit later. Never the same. I failed. My mother put me through college but it wasn’t until I was forty that the opportunity to attend university happened. The love I had at 11 years of age never really changed although I married to another person at 21 and divorced later, my first love remains the same and perhaps that’s the way it should be, we all move on. Your story rings so true perhaps for more people than you realise. Thank you. I will now read your other stories thank you for giving me the opportunity to read your well written books. I have always been a book worm and this has never changed and I am now 73. Keep up your writing.

  17. Ann Carroll June 20, 2016 at 7:56 pm #

    I really enjoyed that! Beautiful story which left me with a big lump in my throat. Thank you for sharing it Mark!

  18. Heather Walker June 13, 2016 at 11:48 am #

    Loved this story. Very nostalgic and heart warming. I hated my time at school and left with no qualifications. It was only on leaving school that I found a love of books and now avidly read. I also took and passed a Certificate Course in Humanities with the OU in my 50’s. These days I am writing too, trying to get a novel published! I love your stories and have just ordered your first novel.

    • Mark Haysom June 14, 2016 at 7:47 am #

      I’m glad you enjoyed THE TEST, Heather. And thank you for ordering LOVE, LOVE ME DO! Best of luck with the novel.

  19. Diana May 23, 2016 at 8:12 pm #

    What a beautifully written story. Because of illness and missing so much schooling I didn’t pass my eleven plus. I went to a secondary school but didn’t do well there either. Other friends who went on to grammar school often gave me books to read that I loved. My love of reading stemmed from that. Your story was so easy to read to. It made me remember that part of my childhood. I’m going to ask my daughter to buy me your books and no doubt she to will read them. Thank you for such a wonderful evening of indulgement.

    • Mark Haysom May 24, 2016 at 7:26 am #

      I’m so glad you enjoyed THE TEST, Diana, and that it brought back memories for you. You’ll find my other free stories here You might also like to see details of my two novels – LOVE, LOVE ME DO and IMAGINE

    • Rita Edwards June 1, 2016 at 11:19 pm #

      This is a beautiful story so very well written bringing memories of school which at times was very difficult as I only went to school half a day because of the war l always felt there was thing I did not understand until I left school you are a very good story teller thank you .

  20. Linda Weeks April 24, 2016 at 10:48 pm #

    Wow! This is such a lovely and inspiring story, and told with such insight into both characters. Sad and heartwarming in equal measure. And unforgettable! I loved it and will now look forward to reading more!

  21. Val April 22, 2016 at 2:31 pm #

    Beautiful sat reading it with tears in my eyes. I was one of the kids who took 11 plus and was borderline went to grammar school and it was the worst days of my life. Wish I have gone to secondary school always felt out of my comfort zone.

  22. Val White April 20, 2016 at 4:01 pm #

    Loved this story. From line one I was hooked.
    I was in the story, you are a very good writer.
    Looking forward to the next one.

  23. Mary strickland April 19, 2016 at 8:59 am #

    Lovely story ,enjoyed reading it, lessons to be learned,never give up#

  24. Pat Northall April 14, 2016 at 1:13 am #

    Hi Mark, I’m so glad I came across your page on Facebook. Just read your wonderful Story “The Test”, It has everything childhood sweethearts, loss, and a love that stands the test of time. Also the lesson in life to never give up through adversity. But, the most important message is the “11+plus”. I too failed, but went on to Tech. College and a late starter too.
    I really enjoyed your writing, and you saved the real lesson in life to the end. Thankyou, I shall look out for your next story, and it’s great to discover a new writer.


  25. Jackie Roberts April 7, 2016 at 10:41 am #

    Just loved this Mark
    It took me back to my roots to in a council scheme here in Edinburgh
    But yes we are shaped by our circumstances and surroundings
    Will def be reading your other books
    Thanks. For this

  26. Helene Morris April 1, 2016 at 8:05 pm #

    I have just devoured ‘The Test’ and will now read your other stories! I was ‘the weak link’ in my music teacher’s chain and didn’t reach my full potential until returning to study as a mature student. Your story touched a couple of raw nerves that have lain dormant for, perhaps, 45 years! Beautiful writing – so glad to have discovered you.

    • Mark Haysom April 2, 2016 at 8:03 am #

      I’m glad you enjoyed THE TEST, Helene. I’m glad my story meant something to you. You’ll find my other stories here – I hope you enjoy them

  27. Judy Bristow April 1, 2016 at 8:20 am #

    How nice of you to reply to everyone!
    I will certainly be reading your other stories…

  28. Judy Bristow March 31, 2016 at 10:05 pm #

    Beautifully written,with amazing empathy and sensitivity. I really enjoyed reading your story tonight.

    • Mark Haysom April 1, 2016 at 7:42 am #

      I’m glad you enjoyed THE TEST, Judy. It’s wonderful to receive such positive feedback. You’ll find other stories of mine here that, I hope, you might also enjoy

  29. Patricia Elliott March 20, 2016 at 8:20 am #

    I enjoyed the story. I went to a secondary modern school but still did well . Went on to do further education. The grammar school in my area had a big catchment area so you were very lucky to attend it. You still could succeed if you worked hard.

  30. Anita Louise March 20, 2016 at 8:00 am #

    What a wonderful sensitively written story – Thanku so much for sharing it with us -so glad it ended well – often it dosn’t………

  31. Mrs Wendy Calvert March 16, 2016 at 12:28 pm #

    What a truly lovely story and rings so true in so many circumstances both then and still now. I have Imagine on my kindle ready to start when I finish To Kill A Mockingbird , love your stories.x

    • Mark Haysom March 17, 2016 at 8:19 am #

      Glad you enjoyed it, Wendy. If you haven’t read it already, you might like to read LOVE, LOVE ME DO before you get to IMAGINE. Although IMAGINE can be read as a stand-alone, it is a sequel to the first book. Also, there are more short stories to dioscover, if you haven’t done so already Mark

  32. sheila b March 9, 2016 at 10:42 am #

    Just lovely, beautifully written. Are you a south London boy?

    • Mark Haysom March 10, 2016 at 7:49 am #

      No, I’m not from South London, Sheila – although I have got to know parts of it quite well during my working life. I’m glad you enjoyed THE TEST. You’ll find other stories of mine here that you might also enjoy

  33. Anita Bradley March 8, 2016 at 10:37 am #

    Reminded me of my 11 plus. I was sick so couldn’t take it with all my classmates. I had to go to a strange school I didn’t know with other children who were taking their exam. I was really nervous and couldn’t concentrate. I failed of course! a lovely story I enjoyed very much.Thankyou.

  34. Lynette Haines February 29, 2016 at 7:30 pm #

    Loved the story. Just shows that going to the “secondary modern” wasn’t the end of the world.

  35. sue gosling February 27, 2016 at 7:27 am #

    A poignant story that touched my heart. My life changed when I passed the 11+ too. I attained my dream of becoming a teacher and eventually worked in an FE College. My first marriage failed but my second is a delight! My 2 children and his 3 make me very happy and now we have 6 wonderful grandchildren. But I too sadly drifted away from my roots and now my sister doesn’t want to know me which makes it a sad tale too.

  36. Mark Haysom February 24, 2016 at 8:28 am #

    Thank you so much for taking the trouble to write, Sheila. I’m delighted to hear that my stories are of some help at what is obviously a difficult time. If you do feel like trying a book, you will find that LOVE, LOVE ME DO is written in short chapters that would make it easy to put down and pick up again. Best wishes. Mark.

  37. Irene January 19, 2016 at 9:04 am #

    Loved this story. This is very similar to my own life story. First met my husband in school. Left and didn’t see each other for over ten years. Met up by accident and it was like we had been together all the time. Six months later got married and have been together forty three years.

    • Mark Haysom January 19, 2016 at 9:16 am #

      That’s a wonderful story, Irene. I’m so glad you enjoyed THE TEST and that it meant something to you. You’ll find other stories of mine here that you might also enjoy

  38. Elinor Bentley January 17, 2016 at 11:13 am #

    What a lucidly written and totally believable indictment of the 11+ system. And I went to a grammar school from a council estate myself 1957-1962. I identified totally with the characters in this.

    • Mark Haysom January 17, 2016 at 12:19 pm #

      Thank you so much, Elinor: I’m glad THE TEST meant something to you. You’ll find other stories of mine here that you might also enjoy

  39. LynMcLeod December 29, 2015 at 3:55 am #

    Lovely story. Lovely ending.

    • Mark Haysom December 29, 2015 at 11:16 am #

      Glad you liked it, Lyn.

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